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Essay Help Please??????

Monday, February 15th, 2010

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Diet and exercise or surgery? That is the question for thousands of overweight Americans. In this essay I will compare diet and exercise with two kinds of surgery, liposuction and gastric bypass.
Diet and exercise is cheaper than having surgery. When you eat healthier you can cut out expensive junk food and high calorie drinks from your shopping list. Having surgery will cost you thousands while a gym membership will cost you thirty dollars a month.
Diet and exercise have no risks. Eating healthy and working out wont bust open
your stomach, but surgery could. Gastric bypass could lead to nasty infections, and ulcers.
Liposuction could leave you with disfiguring scars. While diet and exercise will lead to
more energy during the day and restful nights.
For people who want results fast surgery would be best. Diet and exercise is slow compared to liposuction. Liposuction will literally suck that fat right out of you! Also with liposuction you can target one area like the stomach, hips, thighs, and even your face. With diet and exercise you can’t just do abdominal exercises and get a flat stomach.
People who have gastric bypass surgery have a bigger chance of keeping the weight off. In gastric bypass surgery the surgeon creates a smaller stomach pouch. Having a smaller stomach makes you feel fuller sooner and eat less food. 98% of people who have gastric bypass surgery keep the weight off compared to only 50% of people who loose it by diet and exercise.